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When Summer Becomes Autumn

Writer: Cathy Stenquist
Cathy Stenquist
Sep 4
2 min read

I had forgotten how inspiring I found the Crayola Crayon color names I have been working with this year, and how poems seem to flow more easily at times from colors than from other words. It felt good to sit down this week and choose three new colors.


Snapped this week in Massachusetts.


This week's colors were inspired by the change in seasons from swimsuits and to comfy sweatshirts.

  • Tan

  • Bittersweet Shimmer

  • Goldenrod




Let's start with the color:

Tan


Do you remember these ads? Check out the copy....


Turn on a tan with Johnsons. Right, Baby? Johnson's Baby Oil is the same great, pure oil your Mom probably used on your skin when you were just a mini-kid. It has no sunscreen like tanning lotions and creams. So there is nothing to block out the golden sun. You tan faster and deeper than ever before. And you stay tan longer, too. Come on. Turn on, your great big beautiful baby you.


YIKES!!!!! My dermatologist is shaking in her boots right now.


The color tan reminded me of my mother years ago, who fell for the ads like this one for Johnson's Baby Oil and never went outside or to a lakeside beach without slathering it on, not fully understanding the damage she was doing to her skin. I had fun leaving a little message along the left side of this poem.



Next is:

Bittersweet Shimmer


The name of this color reminded me of the last days of vacation and the bittersweet feeling of knowing summer is ending. We find ourselves in this "summertime limbo," not wanting to let go of the sun, fun and slower pace. Even the colors of the sky are speaking to us.;)





And finally...

Goldenrod


While looking for images, I came across this one and wanted to learn more. I found out that the pretty yellow plant, goldenrod, is not the allergy culprit I believed it to be; rather, it is ragweed.


Goldenrod is actually a very important source of fuel and nutrition for monarch butterflies on their migration. Later in the season, its seeds feed birds and wildlife. So I imagined an ad for a Goldenrod cafe. I tried to use the Haiku Sonnet form. You more experienced "Haiku Sonnet pros" from last week will probably see some problems here, but it was fun to try.



Thank you to Patricia J. Franz for hosting Poetry Friday this week. Her poem "Summers End is a delightful read. The imagery!!! More lovely poems can be found here on her blog, REVERIE.




9 Comments


jone
Sep 07

What a fabulous idea, crayon names! I love 'bittersweet shimmer" And those days of tanning have long gone away. My dermatologist would cringe as well,

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Denise Krebs
Sep 06

Cathy, like you and Mary Lee, I'm glad you are back to being inspired your the Crayola crayon box! The baby oil ad is frightening, isn't it? And your poem is spot on. The brilliance of the photo really enhances your Bittersweet Shimmer poem. It is hard to say goodbye to summer (even here in the desert, in some ways). I don't think anyone is more of an expert with haiku sonnets than you. Your goldenrod cafe poem is a delight. (I enjoyed going down a bit of a goldenrod/ragweed rabbit hole today too.) Thanks!

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Linda Baie
Sep 05

I love each one so much, Cathy, truly the summer treats, even with the first as a warning. Yes, I grew up with the baby oil crowd, but as I have a tannish skin, I used sunscreen because I didn't need to change more. I didn't know I was so lucky! I love "the bittersweet shimmer of summer". It feels just like it is, at least to me! And, finally, It's great to imagine the butterflies filling up their tanks with the good goldenrod nectar! Keep going with those colors! These are wonderful!

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Mary Lee
Sep 05

I'm so glad you're back to your Crayola poems! I love these so much!


I'm a victim of the craze for baby oil -- a big chunk of my right forearm is gone, but so is the basal cell "big 'C'"!


My garden includes some goldenrod, even if others might see it as a weed! I'm happy to provide late-summer fuel for pollinators!

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Rose Cappelli
Sep 05

Cathy - you chose the absolutely best colors for the end of summer. I especially love "Bittersweet Shimmer" with the blues and greens turning caramel and gold, and summer writing its parting letter. Beautiful images! I remember those baby oil ads and just cringed at the copy. Your acrostic sent a great message.

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